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Thank you very much for the very useful article. I would be so grateful if you could suggest me the perfect study plan in order to prepare for my second Ielts exam on 12 September. I need to improve each section with 0.

You know your weaknesses and you know the time you have available — you are the best one to make a study plan. So, which one is correct 1. Examples are usually put in the body paragraphs to support your ideas, not at the end. See this page for correct linking words: Then review all tips on the main writing task 2 page: Dear Liz, I would be acknowledge by my heartfelt appreciation about your website and merits videos.

In recent years , there has been hard rise in ielts examination. With all this taken into account , I believe that I have some problems in reading to pass this examination. It has fluctuated on 5 to 6. This is often cited as a reason for practicing more but I can not fix my grade in 6. It will make me feel happy if I solve this problem. Eventually, if you have leisure convenient, please, test us with some sample questions talking points by writing in both issues and make us as well.

With warmest wishes, As ever, Hooman. I will be very direct with you. To get band score 7, you need to have a very strong level of English in which you have good use of English but with few errors. Your message above shows quite a lot of errors when you use vocabulary that is not appropriate.

You clearly know a lot of vocabulary but not how to use it and what it really means. For this reason, you are not getting band 7 in your listening or reading etc.

Of course, you will need to check your techniques and follow the right tips but at the end of the day, if your English is not band 7, it will be hard to get that score. Spend time developing your English. I am weak in speaking module due to lack of ideas. That has good ideas and vocabulary for various topics.

Hi Liz , u r ways of study fanatastic,I need ur guidance i live near border problem regarding internet, I can buy ur task 2 any book I need 6 GN plz help me. Dear Liz , I would like to buy your essay tips, please could you tell me as soon as possible ,I just booked my test for first of August.

At present, I have just opened my video course with in-depth lessons and tips for writing: The linking words you presented to are very helpful. Hope to hear more from your post. I want to seek help from you in doing my essay. I am really having a hard to put my ideas. I need a band score of 7 in all categories. You should go through topics and research ideas for your essays. You can find some ideas on my blog and others online.

Then practice adapting the ideas to suit the essay question and the instructions. I will do as you said.

I will read your blog. This can be seen by the growing number of working people who resort to buy ready-made meals for convenience instead of cooking at home. Thanks for pointing it out. I just found this website yesterday when I was looking for some stuff for ielts self preparation.

Yes, I would like to take an exam and also like to ask you how long you recommend a prepation before the exam date? It really depends on a number of factors, one of which is your understanding of the test and requirements of the band scores. If your English is suitable for the band score you are aiming for, you will only need to focus on exam skills to make sure you reach your potential.

The skills will help you understand how to approach questions and what the examiner is looking for in your writing and speaking. Once you feel comfortable with all that, you will have a clear idea of how long you want to practice before your test.

Whatever you decide, make sure you are frequently getting the band score you want in practice tests. Thank u for your reply. I need least band 6. What do u think about level B2 communicator. Is possible to get that band and of course with preparation bfr exam.

You start in any way you want. I advise you to learn the content and question types of all skills and then start practicing. Then do practice tests to check your level. After that, start planning your development. I got overall 7. Thankyou so much for being my virtual tutor. Preparation material and guidelines by you helped me a lot in achieving my target in first attempt. Too good again, I am going to give my GT on 1st Aug.

Thanking you so much. I like those additional examples by using linking devices. I am from Pakistan and I want to tell you that you are indeed a very great teacher. The key is probably your level of English. Your results are quite even so you will probably need to develop your English language to get a higher score. Is it OK to make up such information to give examples?

Sure, if you want. Examples can just be an example of a situation. I also have a question about statistics… Do we have to mention where we got the information from?

Dear Liz, Thank you so much for your very informative lesson here. It really helped me when I took the exam on 11th of July and I got a total band score of 7. You are indeed a blessing. God bless you more. Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed. Hi, my name is Elizabeth Liz. January 16, at 7: January 16, at 8: January 30, at 6: January 3, at 9: January 3, at December 13, at December 13, at 1: November 29, at November 29, at 1: November 14, at 3: November 14, at 5: October 16, at 6: October 16, at 8: November 16, at 5: November 16, at 6: September 8, at 6: September 8, at 9: October 11, at 6: July 12, at 2: July 8, at 5: July 8, at 6: June 22, at 8: June 22, at 9: May 25, at 3: May 25, at 4: April 27, at 1: April 27, at 4: April 16, at Thank you, Hari, India.

April 16, at 1: April 17, at 4: April 17, at April 15, at 6: April 16, at 4: April 16, at 5: April 17, at 5: March 22, at 5: Hi Liz, I have a question regarding grammar. Here are the two examples I saw in your blog: March 22, at March 8, at 9: March 8, at February 7, at 8: December 23, at 5: Hi Liz, I can not buy your lesson which must be paid by paybal, because in Turkey there is not paybal.

September 8, at 5: September 9, at August 25, at 3: August 25, at 4: June 16, at 1: February 29, at 8: In the last scene, I was two sentences: Is it a typo in the second sentence? Many thanks for your tutoring videos. They are extremely helpful! March 1, at 6: July 4, at I wonder if it is possible to include false statistics in my writings? July 4, at 8: April 25, at So, we should put doing after the resort to.

January 4, at 3: January 7, at 6: December 21, at 6: December 25, at 5: October 25, at 2: October 19, at 2: Le Duc Huy says: October 13, at 1: October 15, at 4: October 16, at 4: October 16, at 5: October 8, at October 4, at 9: Can we make up our own examples with fake dates and events.??

October 4, at October 5, at 9: October 2, at 2: HAllo, I was wondering, it won t be considered ok to write 2 ideas in one paragraph? October 2, at 3: August 24, at 7: August 24, at 5: August 24, at 6: August 24, at 3: August 23, at 5: August 23, at August 20, at 7: Hi Liz, Thank you very much for the very useful article.

Many thanks again, Yen. August 20, at 8: August 15, at Hello Liz, I would be so grateful if you could suggest me the perfect study plan in order to prepare for my second Ielts exam on 12 September. Thank you in advance, Genta. November 15, at November 16, at August 12, at August 13, at 3: July 31, at 2: July 31, at Possibly in the future. July 30, at 8: July 30, at 7: The "Works Cited" or "Bibliography" section at the bottom of the page can also be a good starting point for finding reliable sources that can provide more reputable information.

However, if your teacher forbids even that much, a normal encyclopedia can serve the same function. Take detailed notes, keeping track of your sources. Record the facts and where you got them from. Write down your sources in the correct citation format so that you don't have to go back and look them up again later. Note cards are a great option for keeping track of information. If you don't want to use note cards, you could try a digital option! For example, you might try digital note cards for an easy solution, such as the site SuperNotecards.

If you're more tech savvy, you could try a bibliographic software like Zotero. If you write a lot, you might try a writing project software, such as Scrivener. A good essay writer either includes the contrary evidence and shows why such evidence is not valid or alters his or her point of view in light of the evidence. In your research you'll probably come across really well-written and not so well-written arguments about your topic. The bibliographies of the well-written essays can also provide you with good sources.

Do some analysis to see what makes them work. What claims does the author make? Why do they sound good? Is it the logic, the sources, the writing, the structure? Is it something else? What evidence does the author present to you? Why does the evidence sound credible? Is the logic sound or faulty, and why?

Why is the logic sound? Brainstorm your own ideas. Sure, you can use the arguments of others to back up what you want to say. However, you need to come up with your original spin on the topic to make it uniquely yours. Make lists of ideas.

You can also try mind mapping. Walk in your neighborhood or local park and think about your topic. Be prepared for ideas to come to you when you least expect them. Write your thesis statement. Look at the ideas that you generated. Choose one to three of your strongest ideas that support your topic. You should be able to support these ideas with evidence from your research. Write a thesis statement that summarizes the ideas that you plan to present.

Essentially, let the reader know where you're going, why, and how you will get there. A thesis statement should have a narrow focus include both your topic and what you plan to present.

For example, "Although Eli Whitney's cotton gin ushered in a new era of American prosperity, it also widened the gap in suffering for African-American slaves, who would soon be more in demand, and more exploited, than ever. Take the thoughts that you brainstormed and assemble them into an outline. Write a topic sentence for your main ideas.

Then, underneath, make bullet points and list your supporting evidence. Generally, you want three arguments or pieces of evidence to support each main idea. In , after the cotton gin had been adopted, slaves totaled about 1.

Write the body of your essay. You do want to think about length here; don't write pages and pages if your teacher wants 5 paragraphs. However, you should freewrite to let your thoughts reveal themselves. You can always make them more concise later. Don't use "I" statements such as "I think. Simply stating your argument with supporting facts makes you sound much more authoritative. Instead of writing, "I found Frum to have a conservative bias," tell the reader why your statement is true: It's tempting to allow your thoughts to wander or to add additional information that seems interesting.

However, this distracts from your purpose and undermines your essay. Make sure you stay on topic! Come up with a compelling title and introduction. Your title and introduction make people want to read your essay. If your teacher is the audience, then of course your teacher will read the whole piece.

However, if you're submitting to an essay contest or writing an essay for college admissions, your title and introduction have to hook the reader if you want to meet your objectives. Skip obvious expressions such as, "This essay is about, "The topic of this essay is" or "I will now show that". Try the inverted pyramid formula.

Start off with a very broad description of your topic and gradually narrow it down to your specific thesis statement. Try to use no more than 3 to 5 sentences for short essays, and no more than 1 page for longer essays. Alternatively, you might open with an anecdote or quote that sets up the importance of your topic. Every year, thousands of unwanted and abused animals end up in municipal shelters. Being caged in shelters not only causes animals to suffer but also drains local government budgets.

Towns and cities could prevent both animal abuse and government waste by requiring prospective pet owners to go through mandatory education before allowing them to obtain a pet.

Although residents may initially resist the requirement, they will soon see that the benefits of mandatory pet owner education far outweigh the costs. Summarize your points and suggest ways in which your conclusion can be thought of in a larger sense. Answer questions like, "What are the implications of your thesis statement being true? In a sense, you are repackaging your thesis statement in your concluding paragraph by helping the reader to remember the journey through your essay. Nail the last sentence.

If your title and first paragraph make the reader want to read your essay, then your last sentence makes the reader remember you. If a gymnast does a great balance beam routine but falls on the landing, then people forget the routine. Gymnasts need to "stick the landing," and so do essay writers. Wait a day or so and re-read your essay. Get your essay done a couple of days before the due date so that you have time to go back and revise it to make it polished. Avoid turning in a first draft that you haven't double-checked for errors.

Correct errors related to grammar, punctuation and spelling. Consult a style book if you are unsure how to properly use quotation marks, colons, semicolons, apostrophes or commas. Avoid using exclamation points. Make sure you know how to use apostrophes correctly. Look for mistakes involving general punctuation. Check for run-on sentences , commas and periods inside quotation marks, as well as sparely-used dashes, colons, and semi-colons.

Remove any repetitive or unnecessary words. Vary your language with the help of a thesaurus. Also, consult a dictionary to make sure that you're using unfamiliar words correctly.

At the same time, try to keep your language short, sweet, and to the point. A thesaurus is a great tool, but don't just use big words to sound fancy. The best essays are clear, concise, and easily understood by a wide audience. Focus on writing killer verbs for sentences. Verbs communicate the action in a sentence and drive the action.

A great verb can be the difference between a bland sentence and a beautiful one. Adjectives are great descriptive words, but when used indiscriminately, they can burden an essay and make it less readable. Try to let the verbs and nouns do most of the heavy lifting before you focus on adjectives. Avoid colloquial informal writing. Do not use contractions or abbreviations e.

Your essay should have a serious tone, even if it's written in a light or lyrical style. Analyze how your essay flows. Does each sentence lead smoothly to the next? Does each paragraph flow logically to the next? Although you can analyze your essay by reading through it, it's helpful to make a reverse outline, working from your essay to outline your thoughts.

When events happen in sequence: I first started to realize that I was in the minority when I was in middle school My realization was confirmed when I proceeded to high school. If sentences elaborate on each other: Plants need water to survive A plant's ability to absorb water depends on the nutrition of the soil. When an idea contrasts with another idea: Vegetarians argue that land is unnecessarily wasted by feeding animals to be eaten as food Opponents argue that land being used for grazing would not be able to be used to create any other kind of food.

If you're relaying a cause and effect relationship: I will be the first person in my family to graduate from college I am inspired to continue my family's progress through the generations. When connecting similar ideas: Organic food is thought to be better for the environment.

Cut information that's not specifically related to your topic. You don't want your essay to ramble off-topic. Any information that doesn't directly or indirectly support your thesis should be cut out. Have someone read your paper aloud to you.

Your ears are sometimes better than your eyes at picking up mistakes in language. The essay should sound like it has a good flow and understandable words. As an alternative, you can record yourself reading it aloud and play it back. Rewrite any problematic body passages. If needed, rearrange sentences and paragraphs into a different order. Make sure that both your conclusion and introduction match the changes that you make to the body.

Compose your essay with a clear purpose. A persuasive essay is designed to sway the reader to adopt your point of view about a topic.

This means it's important that your views are expressed in a clear, concise manner, which allows the reader to understand your argument. These are good examples of persuasive essay topics you might write about: Whether governments should or should not fund embryonic stem cell research. Whether love is a virtue or a vice. Why Citizen Kane is the best movie of the 20th century. Why American citizens should be forced to vote. Write your essay as though you are conducting a debate.

When you speak in a debate, you introduce your topic, list your evidence and draw a conclusion for the people who are listening. A persuasive essay has a similar structure. Collect facts from good sources to justify your opinions. Support your argument with reasoned facts. A well-written essay is great, but a well-argued essay is undeniable. In addition to doing research, you can perform empirical experiments including taking surveys, doing interviews or conducting experiments. Survey results or interviews could be great pieces of information to start your essay with.

Tell a story about the facts. Don't just list the facts; tell a story! How would you like to be one of those wrongfully-convicted inmates? Present the other side of your argument and use logic and facts to show why the other side's opinion is either inaccurate or not up-to-date.

You're showing the reader you are unbiased and considered the other arguments, but you concluded that your argument is the best. Time after time, evidence has disproved this theory.

The death penalty, in fact, does not act as a deterrent to crime: Tie all your ideas together in a gripping conclusion. Be sure to stress your thesis, or what you are arguing for or against, one last time.

Use some of the information you have discussed, or a story you've saved, to color your conclusion a little bit. Choose a subject for your essay. You'll be investigating a topic and presenting your viewpoint about the topic based on evidence. Research papers usually fall under this category of writing.

For example, you could write an expository essay arguing that embryonic stem cell research can lead to cures for spinal cord injuries and illnesses like Parkinson's or diabetes. Expository essays differ from persuasive essays because you aren't stating an opinion.

You're stating facts that you can back up with research. Select your strategy and structure. Some common strategies and structures for expository writing include: Definition essays explain the meaning of terms or concepts.

Classification essays organize a topic into groups starting with the most general group and narrowing down to more specific groups. In this type of essay, you'll describe either the similarities and differences or both between ideas or concepts.

These essays explain how topics affect each other and how they are interdependent. How-to essays explain the steps required for completing a task or a procedure with the goal of instructing the reader. Keep your views unbiased. Expository essays aren't about opinions. They are about drawing a conclusion based on verifiable evidence.

You might even find that, with new information, you'll have to revise your essay. If you started out writing about the scarcity of information regarding global warming, but came across a bunch of scientific evidence supporting global warming, you at least have to consider revising what your essay is about. Use the facts to tell the story. The facts will tell the story itself if you let them. Think like a journalist when writing an expository essay.

If you put down all the facts like a reporter, the story should tell itself. Don't mess with structure in expository essays. In narrative essays, you can twist and turn the structure to make the essay more interesting. Be sure that your structure in expository essays is very linear, making it easier to connect the dots. Tell your story vividly and accurately. A narrative essay recounts an incident that either you or others have experienced. In a narrative essay, you could describe a personal experience in which embryonic stem cell research could have helped you or someone you love conquer a debilitating condition.

Include all of the elements of good storytelling.

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Oct 30,  · I am trying to write a semi-formal essay. I am trying to list out questions in an essay. Take this sentence for example: After I met Shelly, I began to question myself: Who am I?, Why do I exist?, What is life? How would I write a sentence like this, which includes listing some questions, in a grammatically correct sentence?

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Your essay could contain a numbered list (like you are reading now) or it could be written as a standard narrative essay. If you are instructed to write a step-by-step without using numbers, your essay should contain all the elements of any other essay assignment: an introductory paragraph, . How to Put Examples in Your Essay. July 27, by Liz Comments. All Linking Words for Essay Writing. You can find a list of all linking words that can be used in essay writing: Linking Words for Writing. IELTS Essay Questions. Over IELTS Essay Questions; Main IELTS Pages.

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A reference page lists the works cited in the text of an essay. You have several formats at your disposal to create a list of references. For example, APA style guidelines are very popular and easy to use. This page continues from our page: Planning an Essay, the essential first step to successful essay writing. This page assumes that you have already planned your essay, you have taken time to understand the essay question, gathered information that you intend to .